Benny
In 2 days me and Benny went to another i was so happy the we moved because after he pushed me off in to the water i hated his sole but now im 16 im over it now but when i did move school's i will admit i did miss him a bit.
Friday, July 27, 2018
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Hi Caleb
ReplyDeleteThanks for getting your reading work up onto your blog. Your writing would be improved if you gave a read and edited for capital letters and full stops! I know you know where these are supposed to go. Have another look and see if you can make this piece even better!
I like how you are looking back on the story now that the narrator is 16 years old. That's a cool perspective to take.
- Miss Birtch