Mr Chelsea's Greenhouse
Chapter 4
Eva was worried to go to Chelsea's home do jobs because his blue eyes gave him an angry look but when Eva went to his home she was not worried at all. Eva loved the heavenly look of the place the birds wore singing and there is fruit for the birds to eat and there are butter flies. When Eva went into the green house Mr Chelsea he was holding a broom and gave it to Eva started to sweep the glass she had broke. Mr Chelsea asked if she had liked Rose she wanted to say no but Eva said I like the flowers that grow on them. Mr Chelsea grabbed one of the flowers off of his rose and let Eva small it. Eva loved the small of the rose and she said I could just eat it. Mr Chelsea took another flower and ate it you can eat the flower of the rose. It was lunch time and Eva went home and she talked about how much she cant wait to go again.
Tuesday, September 4, 2018
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Hi Caleb, I enjoyed reading your work. Because I am your teacher, I knew this was for your Week 7 reading, but I wonder if you could add something to your post to help others know what you are writing about.
ReplyDeleteCan you add some more detail about what your task was?
- Miss Birtch
Hi Caleb
ReplyDeleteI like the blog post you wrote because you had nearly every detail in it, maybe check thru the writing again because I saw a mistake or two.
- David
Kia ora David
DeleteWell done on commenting on the work your Reading group has been making. I wonder if you could make your comment more helpful by explaining the mistakes that you saw so that Caleb knows what he can improve on?
- Miss Birtch