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She saw it coming from around the corner the default skin stood there for 1 minute then john wick had build a one by one behind the house to where the default was standing by the time the john wick had made his one by one we was out of mats. The default skin had started to move again as the controller had came back to life. The john wick had seen the default skin but the default skin had build a one by one with a roof and the john wick jumped of the roof and shot his Ar like there was to morrow. he breaks my wall and bam got him with a pump in the head. Good night john wick.
Monday, August 6, 2018
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Hi Caleb
ReplyDeleteInteresting piece of writing. I am wondering who John Wick is? Is he a character from a game? With some more information, you reader might be able to follow your story better. I like how at the end I assume he got injured or hurt and you finished with "Good night John Wick" to symbolize that. I thought that was a very interesting ending.
- Miss Birtch