Dear Emma
Im Caleb a year 8 student from Hornby high school and a student from 8BH. If I won the summer learning challenge I would take the $50 and save up for something better. I would attend and do the summer learning challenge every day.
Tuesday, November 20, 2018
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Hi Caleb
ReplyDeleteI wonder if you can remember some of the important structures for writing a persuasive letter. I would really like to see you providing some more detail in your letter. Can you take another look and see what edits you can make?
I hope you partake in Summer Learning Journey!
- Miss Birtch
Kia ora Caleb,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Laura and I am one of the bloggers for the Summer Learning Journey. It's great that you have already started blogging about the Summer Learning Journey!
What a wise idea to keep the money and save up for something that you really want. What do you think you would save the money for? If I won $50 I think I would save the money too, and wait until I had enough to buy a surf board. I think I might be saving for a while!
I hope to see more of your blog posts on the Summer Learning Journey!
From Laura