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Wednesday, November 21, 2018

My task was to tell a story in 1st person about the song called happier by marshmallow we could pick between the dog or the girl and I chose the girl because she has an interesting role in the song.

It was my 9th Birthday I was sitting down at the kitchen table surrounded by kids screaming and yelling and poping blooms the first thing I received was my cake with nine candles but a girl came running up to me and blew out the candles I was frustrated at the girl I couldn't believe someone would have the audacity to do that. Soon after mum took the cake and dad came back with my first present I opened the present and go a soft yellow silk bow dad left the room and came back with a puppy named Malo he was a small golden retriever aged 1.

After the task we wore mento write about did we enjoy the task or not. I like the task because it was fun and unique and different at the same time if I had the chance to do this again I would.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Caleb

    I like how you reflected on the task and that you enjoyed it! Your story sounds great so far and you used some excellent WOW words like 'audacity'. Make sure you are focussing on your punctuation. I think there could be some full stops put into your intro.

    - Miss Birtch

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