Cats and dogs are the most popular pets in the world but I personally think that cats are better, because they don't cost as much and cats clean up after themselves, unlike dogs.
Cats are cheap and easy to look after because they don't need a leader, or to be groomed and they don't need as many toys as a dog does. Let alone a dog is expensive as it is and to get all the excesses a dog needs it would be better to get a cat over a dog.
Monday, November 5, 2018
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Hello Caleb, I like your writing about how cats are better than dogs, I also think that you didn't put enough evidence as to why cats are better than dogs. maybe next time you do something like this you might want to put more writing and support the side you chose even more.
ReplyDeleteGreat feedback from Andre! You have a very powerful start to a persuasive piece of writing, but with more elaboration on your points and adding more to your writing, your piece would be more successful.
ReplyDeleteKnowing that you had 20 minutes to do this work, I am interested to see how much you will be able to finish when we have our 40 minute test! You are on the right track and your points are clear.
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