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Friday, June 5, 2020

for the last couple of weeks, we have been learning about creative writing and trying to get better at our vocab, reading, and writing, and ever time we have English we add to our word band and wright a couple of small stories this is what I have done.


Reason why I like writing 
  • It's a way to create a new fantasy
  • A way to exercise the brain
  • Gets the amagonatin pumping

Reasons why I don't
  • It hurts my brain
  • I can think
  • Mind blocks
  • Hard to get ideas 
Red +
Words 
(36)

Word bank
-Uncanny
-Fun 
-Boring  
-Isolated 
-Games
-Trampolining 
-Walking 
-Sleep
-Work
-Youtube 
-Late nights
-Social medea 
-Internet
-Fixing things
-Fam
-Electronics
-Google meets








Show 
tell




The night becoming day the morning sound of the birds chirping in the early morning hours I fall asleep

The screeching of the spring and the loud sound of kids jumping high higher and higher...

The rusting of the bushes, the soft brees rushing through my hair, the birds chirping and the soft glow of the sun I strolled...
I watched youtube 

I played on my electronics

I had late nights

I jumped on the trampoline 

I had ununcay felling walking around the block

The night becomes day

Words 
(18) 

… just lost

I stood there. It's 12.30pm I feel the storm rolling in. The air is filled with the smell of rotting wood.

Miss Allen: Good job - 3 different kinds of sentences! Great visualisation.

Word association 2nd 

Dog, animal
Black, white 
Tree, oxygen
Bright, dim
Bucket, water
Picture, frame 
Earth, Life
Climb, top
Password, security 
Clean, dirty 
Elephant, big
Water, fire 
School, ed 
Food, energy
NZ, clean 

Sentence starters 

The torrential rain was pouring down. I stood there sachurated the cold wind howling against my bare skin...

I couldn't believe what I was seeing… 

If I could fly I would travel the world

She looked so ridiculous when she put on that dress 

I suddenly woke up to the sound of a baby crying

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