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Tuesday, May 15, 2018

How space works

Last week the whole class had a task to rite a piece of work that started with how dose that work and I done one about space I took 3 to 4 days to make because I took a long time to think about what I needed to do.

  I could make this better by adding photos and more words because it is not enough.If you like this comment down below. 

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  1. Caleb, I like how you figured out what your next steps could be to improve your work! I think a photo to show what you are talking about would be very interesting to add to your explanation. You are showing our value of achievement by thinking about what you could do next time. Well done!
    - Miss Birtch

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